Thursday, February 9, 2012

To Be a Poet and a Cabinet Maker

Excerpt from "What Rose Light as Breath," For Love of Common Words by Steve Scafidi


I met Steve Scafidi in my senior year of college. At the time, a friend and I were co-editors of our college literary magazine. We had arranged for four semi-local poets to come to campus for poetry readings and one-on-one workshops with creative writing students.

Luckily, of the four poets we invited, I was paired with Mr. Scafidi for my one-on-one. We sat at a cafe table, and he pulled out a copy of a poem I had written, which he had read before our meeting and had written all over in scribbly black pen.

When he is not a poet, Mr. Scafidi is a cabinetmaker. He owns a farm in West Virginia, which he shares with his wife Kathleen. When he sat down with me that day to talk about my poem, he apologized for the state of his hands. They were rough, and his nails were covered in brown, stained lacquer. He said the stuff was nearly impossible to scrub away. And before he said anything about what he had written about my poem, he asked me to read it aloud for him.

When people tell me that they "don't understand" poetry, I want to take them by the hands and lead them to a place where they can hear someone like Mr. Scafidi reading his own work aloud. Poetry was meant to be heard. Real, honest poetry is filled with breath.

We had a long talk that day, about language, images, and the things people feel between lines of poetry. I promised him that I would send him a copy of the finished poem, but I never rewrote it. The copy covered in his notes stays folded in eighths and tucked in my copy of For Love of Common Words.


I rarely write anything anymore, let alone poetry, but a secret part of me still dreams of someday being a poet and a cabinet maker, like Mr. Scafidi. To spend my time among wood and words, breathing in sawdust and listening--waiting--for the poems to speak.

((Barn photo by ~QwikDrah on deviantart, found via Pinterest.))

6 comments:

  1. I have definitely found that hearing a poem read aloud is much more effective than reading it on the page, both in terms of understanding it and engaging with it emotionally. We're really fortunate to live in an era where that experience is open to people, but I feel like we don't take advantage of it enough.

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    1. Back in the day, before television and the internets, people used to recite poetry as part of their evening entertainment. They played a little piano forte, did a little singing and reciting...

      I think we should bring it back ;)

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  2. Beautiful post! I love hearing poetry performed- I am a big fan of performance poetry.

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    1. Oh man, I once spent a whole weekend watching and re-watching Brave New Voices on HBO. There's a bar near my house that has slam-poetry readings, but I've never made it out there. Maybe someday...

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  3. One-on-one time with a talented poet? You're so lucky. I think some people "don't understand" poetry because there's no straightforward easy interpretation of poems always. It may sound strange, but when I write poems, I want them to be read -- if I read them aloud to an audience, something is lost because you can't see how I break the lines and create double meanings with the way I use the space on the page.

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    1. It definitely doesn't sound strange--a huge part of poetry is how it looks on the page, definitely. It's why I'm so fond of the modernists. I think there's something totally magical about hearing someone read their own work, though.

      And yes, I was lucky to have the one-on-one time--if only it could happen again!

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